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Review:MercyWaters says:
I know I gave you a really long review before, but I'm afraid I don't have many things to criticize so I can't do that this time!

I really like this story, and honestly I don't have any complaints. It flowed well and you did a good job portraying Ron's character and the many emotions he was feeling. I applaud you for being able to fit so much information and feeling into such a short little piece. :) It's difficult to do that, but you pulled it off well.

I've always liked little ideas like this, taking a character and focusing on one aspect of their life or personality. Ron's jealousy is alluded to several times in the books, but I've never actually read a fic dedicated to that and I really like how you wrote it. :)

Nice job!


Author's Response: Oh, please don't worry about the review size! I really am just so glad you came by at all, and no criticisms really can't warrant a complaint from me! :3

I love these little 500-word pieces -- they are, if I may be so bold as to say so, some of my most emotional stories, and I think it's because I'm so conscious of having to convey a message in a drastically reduced space. I don't know why, but these entries have always been some of my favorite stories of mine.

I agree with you, too, in that Ron's jealousy is rather overlooked in fic. People tend to go for having him serve as comic relief, and while I certainly don't have a problem with that, there's a lot more to him than that! Anyway, you didn't come by to hear my ramblings, I'm sure. Thanks so much for the quick and lovely review, and I'm really glad you enjoyed the story!

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