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Review:adahpfan says:
Oh. My. Rowling. THAT was unexpected.

I loved this chapter, it's so canon and believable and I love the style. It seems like something straight out of JK's head, with all the mentions of Tom Riddle. The foreshadowing makes it a brilliant read. I think you might just have me hooked.

There are a couple of slight grammar mistakes, nothing major, just things like speech marks being the wrong way round and the like...

The characters are all really believable, and seem to fit really well into their era.

10/10, save the grammar issues :)

Ada/BB4L

Author's Response: I loved this challenge so much and what you gave me was just so perfect. You've also made me fall in love with canon characters, so now... well, I have a lot to thank you for I think. I'm glad you like it! I had such good fun writing it.

Thank you very much :)

-AC


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