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Review:MagicalInk says:
Wow! They ARE very different! Really hooking beggining, I can't wait to read more! I have always thought that Scorpius would be different (I'm working on a fanfic on that actually :P), but I'm still not sure about Draco. I guess we're not going to see him again, so maybe you should add some more description of him. Has the war affected him in anyway? Is he always the same? I bet you could explain that by simply describing the way he talks, for what I just read you're obviously very talented. Another thingy, how did Scorpius arrive to the Potter's house? Is he now allowed to do magic out of school? I'm sure you could also clear that up very easily, maybe by just saying he was happKy he could now apparate whenever and wherever he wanted.
Other than that, it's really good. Please update fast! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

I'm really glad that you enjoyed this, and I will try to update soon, honestly. :D

We will see Draco again, and you'll hopefully learn a lot more about his character later on in the story.

Scorpius apparated to the Potters. This was one of my main concerns actually. I was worried that it wasn't very clear, but I tried to add in a couple of hints about his age. So yeah, although I haven't specified how old he is yet, he's over seventeen, and has left Hogwarts.

Thank you again, so much, for such a kind review! Hopefully there'll be an update soon!


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