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Review:ashling586 says:
I am not sure what I think of this chapter. I have no real clue who the character is that is speaking, and it was a bit hard at first to even figure out what was going on. By the end I had figured out that the speaker was being initiated into the death eaters, but I really don't anything about the speaker to make any real comments on them.
You did a great job keeping it in first person, and the details were nice. I just wish I knew more about who this speaker is. I felt the flow was nice and the pace was good. I didn't notice any major grammar problems.

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review :D It was supposed to be a bit ambiguous and it is hard to comment on character in the first chapter anyway. Thanks for taking the time to review :D

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