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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
So I read this a few days ago but didn't review because I had no idea what to say. You managed to blow me away with just 500 words. And you made it seem so easy.

Taking the color green and using it to symbolize everything bad in Ron's life is really interesting, and well done. It makes me really feel for him as a character, though it's really nice to see him angry for once about always coming second best. I know we caught a glimpse of it in DH, but you really dig into Ron's jealousy here, expose him raw for us to examine. It's very real.

The ending killed me, when Ron was like, 'It's pretty natural, if you ask me. But then, not a lot of people do.' Oh, Ronniekins! My heart breaks!

Just, really fantastically done. You're definitely a writer that I admire and am completely jealous of. You're just so phenomenal, in everything that you do.

Author's Response: I love these 500-word stories -- they are my go-to exercise when nothing else seems to be working for me, and I love the challenge of such a strict word count.

Figurative description is one of my favorite things, and so this challenge was obviously a go for me from the beginning. I cannot begin to tell me how much it means to me that I have your admiration, as well, because you yourself are a prominent and talented author, and that just... I don't even know what to say. Just thank you so much, Missy, and I am forever grateful. ♥

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