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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
This was a very nice one-shot, it dealt with deep emotions and was quite touching, but at the same time it managed to be light and amusing.

I enjoyed the characterization, the interaction between James and Sirius was great, you definetely captured their bromance. Also, that was such a creative idea having them on that mission in Romania. I love reading things like that becasue we dont get to see much of the kinds of things the Order was doing during the war.

I'm definetely a James/Lily shipper, and I really enjoyed how you portrayed their relationship and juxtaposed their situations.

Author's Response: Thanks! I hoped to get their - James and Sirius - characters right as i'm currently writing a Sirius/OC fic, and thought that a one-shot might might help me explore and understand their relationship properly, and hence do it justice in my other novel. Plus all of the James and Lily Christmas sets on Tumblr had my mind whirling with ideas.

I'm glad you liked the Romania idea. I had them in a forest from the beginning, but I didn't know where it was going. I figured we'd heard so much about Charlie's time in Romania and everything else, that it wouldn't seem too outlandish for it to actually happen. I'm really happy that you liked the idea ^_^ I tried to make it original, and I hoped I succeeded.

James and Lily all the way! I'm so glad you liked this, and thanks so much for reviewing. It means a lot to get feedback on my work.

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