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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Back for chapter 2!

So the last chapter ended on a pretty strong cliffhanger, so it was good to find out right away what was causing the horror at the end of the lst chapter.

So a werewolf is killing when its not a full moon? There is obviously something very sinister at work here, and it will be interesting to see what that is.

Minerva's characterization is good, we can definetely see how she would be the one to hold things together. Tom's presense watching her managed to be slightly romantic, but in a really dark, creepy way, which is kind of how all Tom/Minerva's have to be.

Overall this was a good chapter, but it felt very short, and i think some more explanations about the scenes might make it flow a little better.

Author's Response: Hi!
Thank you for such a fast review!
This chapter was basically a filler chapter but also set up the premises for the rest of the story; I think that's why it was so short.

That's also how I imagine their relationship, I'm glad that everyone else sees it the same way :D

Thanks again, and I'll take that into consideration when I edit it


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