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Review:AC_rules says:
Hi there! AC here with your review :)

I've got to say I really liked the way you started off the story talking about how you might begining with the different stories - I thought that was a really nice touch. Plus, it reminded me a little of English Lit and due to that I'm going to count it as revision, which means... well, good things from my conscience.

Its not often that you read about teen witches and wizards having jobs, and I liked the touch. I know from working in a shop myself the feeling of counting down to a break and how long minutes can feel sometimes (particuarlly the damn eight hours shifts - thoes are the worst). I also know the feeling of looking a customer up and down and deciding whether or not they're going to make a big deal out of paying a penny for a plastic bag, so I really liked that.

Another thing I liked was Freddie and the awkward little conversation they had, I think you pulled that off pretty well. Also you're writing had a nice flow all the way through, although I'd say particuarlly after the first bit where the story got going the writing was really good. There were none of thoes awkward stops or bits where you had to read over things to understand what you were trying to say - so that was really good.

Intriguing? Yes, actually. The glimpses of upcoming drama seemed pretty exciting and I liked your OC. I can't say too much about the storyline just yet but I definately think it's an interesting start. The title, too, means I'm pretty intrigued as to what exactly is going to happen.

Thanks for requesting!

-AC

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! :D I'm glad you liked my beginning as I have never been that happy with it. It really made my day seeing someone like you (who I know from reading your stories writes really well) like my beginning. Thank you so much for your review. I think I'm going to have to make sure to request again ;DD

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