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Review:CambAngst says:
Yes, I think they're very good. Chamber of Secrets isn't the easiest book to translate into this format. A lot of things happen, but they're not really the things that are likely to have the greatest impact on the teens as the learn about their parents. So they watch, get a good chuckle and move on. Although I can't wait to see what happens when Ron and Harry enter the actual chamber...

So I thought your writing was a lot better this chapter. Sorry, I'm at work, so I didn't have time to pick out the typos and errors, but I can tell you took your time more with this one.

I liked some of the subtle ways that you're managing the parts of the plot that don't become known until later in the book, especially the way that you're having Ron note Ginny's mysterious absences in some of his letters to her. I think it's kind of cute that he still writes her letters, even though they live in the same dorm.

So I say, persevere! You will get through this book soon, and on to better things. In the mean time, well done!

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