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Review:ValerieAnn says:
Man, I shouldn't have read the reviews first! I was looking for your reply to me and now that person who commented after me got it stuck in my head that Draco may be Andy Granger! Haha okay so I just have a few comments. First, there were some sentences that seemed as though they were missing a word, or the improper form of a word was used which would make it confusing at some times. The spelling was on, it was just the grammar that was a little off this time. Don't worry, when I write my fanfiction I always have to read through it like... 5 times before I finally catch something, so it's a common mistake. Second, I felt like the dinner was a little rushed, and I was just slightly confused on what it was for, it was a good addition though. Third, when Aquila says Annie will inherit it when she was twenty, I thought she already was?

That is all for my constructive comments. I hope you don't get offended by them, I just figured nobody is perfect and I personally love getting it but I just don't know how you feel about that.

Now onto the positive! I just love how Annie views Hermione, like she is some heroin which she really is! I'm really excited to read when Hermione meets Andy! I have a feeling stuff is going down! Not sure how, but that is why I read of course :) I just love Annie in general and so I'm glad this chapter explained from her point of view. The new characters you added (Aquila, Annie, the boys, David, etc) were all added with good timing and not overdone at any point. You ladies are doing fantastic and I can't wait for the last chapter!

Also, the person who recommended this story to me was Ela under the Starsuponyou tumblr. She also informed me of the update! Which I am glad she did cause I do not keep up on this website too much, but I'm happy she told me about this story :)

Author's Response: Hey, I started wondering why you haven't reviewed it. But, thanks btw, for reading and reviewing :-*

Really? Well, I never thought you'll be hoping that Andy Granger is Draco. You're the 4th person who said so.

Well, I thank you for the comments that really helped me. You see, after - posted it and re-read it, I began to wonder some parts too. Maybe, that's because this story was made by two people. We apologise for the parts that confused you.

I'm glad you like the new characters. It was a bit hard for me (and Amelia) to imagine Aquila and David. For Aquila, I should think of a feminine Draco - but the Draco we all wished he would be; happy, mischievous, full of life, and other good things. I really hope I did a great job of making Aquila. For David, I should think of a boy that is a combination of the silly Ron but the mature Harry and also the emotional Ginny. To be truth, he wasn't really the hardest character I created. For Lysander, that was the hardest character. I couldn't make him as the dreamy Luna Lovegood. It would such a waste of character. And, I never knew about Rolf Scamander. So, this character, I created based on my cousin. He's so much like Lysander that I felt like having my character came to live.

And for that kind person who recommended you to this story, I know her. Ela is a dear friend of mine. But, I never really thought she would recommend you this story. And by the way, she told me that you're going to be in a movie with Katherine Heigl. Is that true? If it is, I'm so happy for you. I'm sure you'll do great ;)

So, I think that's all I have to say. I've posted the next book and I think, Friday it'll be validated. Make sure you read it, Valerie.

Till next book!
Sophie (and Amelia)

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