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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Tag! You're it!

Just be careful with punctuation and typos! I spotted quite a few places where a comma would have done nicely, and a few missed out words. One is here: 'Her husband turned his brown eyes gave him an exhausted look ' You missed an 'and' out.
Sometimes the sentences don't seem to flow together that easily or coherently.

BUT! Apart from those little things, this was a lovely, perfect prologue! It's sweet, touching, moving and with some gorgeous emotive and descriptive language in there. I've never seen a boy-oliver written before, and it was a pleasant surprise!

Keep it up!

LWG :)

Author's Response: Hello LWG

I'll look this over :) Thank you, I'd never seen boy-Oliver so I decided to see what I thought boy Oliver was like :)

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