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Review:bob says:
very interesting. The only thing I'd edit is the concept of the letters. It's nice to see the different perspectives of letters to mum and dad, compared to the ones to Ginny, but it's kinda hard to buy into the idea he'd write a letter to his sister when they shared the same dorm. I'd use letters to the oldest brothers instead. But that's not too critical, and it doesn't detract from the story at all.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for this review, I really appreciate the honesty and the foreshadowing!
Seriously, I am impressed with you suggestion because, and this is spoiler, next year will not have letters to Ginny but to one of the older brother (not saying who, you've been spoiled enough)!

I wanted this year to include Ginny with the letter because of her importance to the story. I imagine her receiving letters from her brother, saying that he wants to kill the Heir when, in reality, it was her all along and she knew that.

Next year though, Ron will have some girl problems and will need the help of a brother though this all, not the one of his sister.

I hope you will be following still when this is up and once again, I thank you for reading, taking the time to review and for being honest in your comments!


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