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Review:CambAngst says:
Hello, again.

Os I really only noticed three typos:

'Looks like the sun is about to go down though, it will be better before long Harry,' Ron says in a surprisingly ( ) way, pointing at the lowering red sun." - Not sure what was supposed to go between the parentheses...

"Colin, Ginny and another girl are talking animatly between them," - Did you mean "animatedly"?

"We all cought the cold so we should be clear for the rest of the year." - caught?

I really liked your re-telling of the flying car scene. You hit on some of the more practical aspects of the journey, and made it really believable.

Oh, poor Colin. By the time the poor little guy is dead at the end of Deathly Hallows, you forget just how annoying he was in Chamber of Secrets. Or how shy Ginny used to be. It's fun to dial it back for a while and live it all again.

I had completely forgotten about Ron and the plaque with Tom Riddle's name from the trophy room. That was a great little detail to throw in. You have quite a knack for working in little things that make the reader pause and remember.

All in all, another great chapter. Can't wait to see what you do with the faster-moving parts of the second book!

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