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Review:deluminator says:
Solid second chapter. I am thoroughly enjoying this story.

Your characterisation of Eleanor is brilliant. The thoughts that pass through her mind are an entertaining read and I think she is a realistic potrayal of a naive teenage girl. I know there is so much more to her than that (and I cannot wait until it shows) but in her current situation she just seems so naive.

Author's Response: Thank you! This was an odd chapter to write, I guess because the whole scene with Sirius made me very uncomfortable - I can't even imagine what it must have been like for Eleanor. It's wonderful to hear that Eleanor is a realistic character - I wanted her to be just that, rather than the usual OC I was coming across at the time. She's average, though most of the problem is that she makes herself that way. There is a lot more to her, but she spends so much time repressing it and denying it that it's hard to grasp just what it is.

And she is also naive, mostly when it comes to social situations and especially when it comes to romance. She never loves Sirius, but she does have a serious crush on him (a cliched thing, actually, the unpopular girl crushing on the popular boy). He does, however, teach her a lot. ;)


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