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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Oh wow. I really thought this was one of the best chapters so far, granted it's the second to the last. I had wanted her to confront Severus but I thought this was much more powerful. Miles away and having not seen him for a long time and still she has loyalty to him and she knows he's not a bad guy. I thought that was wonderful.

It surprises me that Sirius hasn't gone off yet because he does need to focus on the Order and Harry. I feel like as much as he wants to help Lucy he can't. Is that a bad thing? Not necessarily. She needs to be able to help herself and better herself, she's a strong woman but I don't think she realizes that. I feel like she doesn't accept the past at times but then she does, she's really a confusing character sometimes.

Author's Response: Hey!

I was worried that this one was sort of weak, especially with the big finish coming up right after it, so I'm super happy to know that you enjoyed it. Snape/Lucy is so important in my head canon, but to know that I've inspired faith in the ship for an outside reader is about the highest compliment one could ask for! :)

Well, like anyone, Lucy has good times and bad ones, times when she's mature and times when her problems overwhelm her. Sirius has been very helpful in being there and helping her start to get "unstuck", but you're right, he's got other responsibilities as well, and she does need to learn to take charge of her life.

Thanks for your kind review! :)

Amanda

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