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Review:CambAngst says:
I felt really terrible for Narcissa, reading this. Lucius... well, he's hard to feel bad for, but I guess I can eke out a bit of sympathy for the old git.

Your writing is really lovely. You painted a very realistic picture, lots of small details and little nuances that really helped to bring out the emotion. It's a sad, sad scene at the end, and you leave the reader with a strong sense of how even Lucius's stubbornness and sense of entitlement failed to completely destroy the love that he once had with his wife. I also think you ended the story at just the right moment, with the questions of what Narcissa will do next hanging poignantly in the air.

I couldn't find any sort of spelling or grammar problems, and the story is so short and covers the subject matter so nicely that there really isn't anything to suggest. Well done!

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for your valuable review :)

I am glad you think I captured it all well. Lucius was a bit hard to write but good to know it worked out well. I am flattered you liked the ending too, and couldn't find any mistakes. Thank you so much for your sweet review! :)


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