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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Back for the last chapter!

The Harry/Ginny scene was pretty heartbreaking, but totally beleivable after what just happened. I'm a fan of that ship in general, but obviously it can't really work anymore in this story. i wonder if Harry will still be welcome around the Burrow after this.

It was also nice to see the Lily/Snape flashback, it seemed very similar to the memories we saw in the prince's tale in the books. That was a nice way to end the chapter having Hermione show up, and you've left us wondering what happens next!

Good luck with the rest of the story, and congrats on winning the challenge!

Author's Response: Usually I'm a Harry/Hermione shipper but whilst writing this Harry/Ginny grew on me so it was quite difficult to write that scene but I think it kind of had to happen.

I'm really happy you thought the flashback was similar to the Prince's Tale in the book because that is definitely what I was aiming for! I'm also happy I ended the chapter quite well.

So for my final reply I need to thank you for picking me as the winner of the challenge! I was so happy when I saw and I honestly smiled for about three days afterwards, it's the first challenge I've entered and to be chosen as winner was brilliant, so thanks so much! And although 10 reviews was the prize I'm really thankful that you made all 10 incredibly informative and that they were all full of constructive criticism and that you also mentioned the things you liked within each chapter, they've all been incredibly helpful!

Thanks again!

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