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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Hermione's characterization was very well done in this chapter, we could really get a clear picture of the guilt and confusion that she must be going through, and how complicated her realtionships will be now.

I like how you included Percy, I was wondering how much he had noticed in the earlier chapter, so that was nice attention to detail. I imagine Percy would have learned a lot about himself and getting his priorities straight after what he went through.

This may have been my favorite chapter so far, it seemed the most natural.

Author's Response: This is my favourite chapter I've written so far too as I was able to concentrate on exactly what Hermione would be feeling and I found it really interesting to write, so I'm happy you found it the best as well.

I'm really glad I nailed Hermione's characterisation too. Also I'm really happy you noticed that Percy noticed something in the earlier chapter, it was a suttle hint so I was worried nobody would notice! Yes, Percy is definitely trying to right his wrongs and I hope that showed through too.


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