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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
You did a realy good job of portraying the Harry/Hermione interaction in this chapter. We could see how they were drawn to each other, but felt guilty about betraying Ron and Ginny.

The letter from Lily was very nice and well written, but just one little thing, I dont think she would have still trusted Snape since he was a death eater at that point, she probably would have given the letter to somebody like Sirius.

The end was a great cliffhanger, I wonder how this will affect all their relationships.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really wasn't sure about how Harry and Hermione would act towards each other in their uncomfortable state so I'm glad I now know I did it well thanks to you and other readers reviews.

Yes, I was warring over the fact that Lily wouldn't have trusted Snape at the time so I think I may need to change that to somebody else, for example Sirius as you so mentioned.

I was definitely aiming for a cliffhanger so thank you for that too!


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