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Review:ashling586 says:
I am not sure what I think about this chapter. Part of me doesn't see anything wrong with it, and part of me wishes there had been more. I think that some of the scenes could have been expanded a bit more and I wasn't sure about the flow of the transitions.
I mainly wonder why, if the girls know exactly who did this, didn't they tell anyone who it was?
Why decide to tell her classmates that rose was killed by a werewolf but not any of the adults? Where are any of the adults in this story? Other than the doctor, I haven't seen any interaction with any adults, and you would think one or two would have shown up to comfort minerva.
It is going to be interesting to see where this story goes. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Well, thanks for the review; can't please everyone :)

The reason there are no adults is because its WWII and in the original war they sent the children away, so (in my story anyway) that's what happened to the students of Hogwarts. Sorry if that's confusing.

Well, thanks anyway :) Jaz

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