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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
This was very interesting to see how everybody reacted to what happened in the previous chapter. The Hermion/Ron and Harry/Ginny converstaions had just the right amount of awkward tension, and it wa sinteresting to see how Ron was totally insecure and jealous, while Ginny was comforting and understanding. Things are really getting complicated for Harry.

On a formatting note, there's a couple really long paragraphs in this chapter that I would recommend breaking up into smaller paragraphs to make them easier to read.

On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you don't seem to see any content faults in this chapter, I was really worried that I'd got the whole reaction bit wrong so I'm really happy you thought it turned out good!

Other reviewers have also mentioned that formatting problem so I'll definitely go back and change it!

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