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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
This was very interesting to see Harry going through Snape's things to try to find out more. And Snape replacing James with himself in the photo? That so creepy, but its totally in character and something he would do.

That was very surprising to see Harry react like that and be so angry with Ginny. I would recommend explaining his reactions a little more since it seemed a little random.

Small formatting note, it would probably help to add a blank line between the lines of dialogue.

On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I've always found Snape a little weird like that and I thought it was something he was likely to do and I'm glad you agree too and that you think it's totally in character, it's great because I'm never sure whether or not I get the characters right.

Quite a few reviewers have mentioned the point that Harry's sudden reaction to Ginny is a little odd and random so I'm definitely going to go back and alter that at some point, so thanks for pointing that out.

Also I will add those blank lines in too if you found it difficult to read.

Thanks once again for the review, this one was definitely helpful.


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