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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Hey its Cassius Alcinder from the forums, I owe you 10 reviews for your challenge prize, so here it goes!

I like how you started things out, showing the immediate aftermath of the battle. Harry seemed totally in character, he would definetely be thinking about all the people that didn't survive.

You set up an interesting Harry/Hermione/Ron dynamic, kind of similar to what is was like when they were in the forest. I would hope that Ron would be over his insecurities by now, but I guess its entirely plausible that he wouldn't be just yet.

Its nice to see that the Weasley's are still looking after Harry.

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm glad you liked the chapter and I'm really happy you though Harry was characterised well as that's important to me! And yes, I was aiming for the dynamic between the trio to be very much like what it was like in the forest so I'm really happy you commented on that point.

Thank you for the review!


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