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Review:CambAngst says:
OK, back for another chapter!

So this was a fun little stroll through a part of Sorcerer's Stone that I honestly didn't remember that well. For some reason, I wanted to place the whole Norbert incident in Chamber of Secrets, but then I thought about it and remembered how Hagrid got the egg in the first place. So thanks for helping me clear that up in my mind!

I loved the precautions Ron orders Ginny to take with the letter. That was really clever! Again, it's interesting to see the difference between how events actually took place and how they've been conveyed to the younger generation in your story. I think it's a very realistic touch. An adult telling these stories to their children most likely would have cut to the chase or perhaps even forgotten some of the less important details.

The dynamic between Ron and Hagrid when Norbert bites Ron was well done. Hagrid was definitely one to generalize his disregard for his own health and safety onto those closest to him. It's endearing and a bit scary.

I couldn't see any spelling or grammar errors in this chapter, so good on you!

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