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Review:Lizzfizz says:
Hey me again,
Loved the first bit about the planning of the holidays with the cousins :)
I do love this story now, and another long chapter :)
I like the way you split up the chapters into sections, makes the story really easy to understand and can I just say that you've got some great chapter titles and I know sometimes it can be hard thinking of them (or at least for me :p) Anyway, you've managed to introduce and dismiss a character in one chapter and you've pulled it off! I don't find myself wishing for loads more about Charlie, Rose's now ex-boyfriend but yeah :)
Another fab chapter, :)
-Lizzfizz (10/10) :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I had been reading some other next-gen fan fics and realized I really haven't incorperated them at all! Me either, Charlie has been hard to write, but it was necissary, for the plot. For chapter titles, for this story at least, I tried to find something directly in the text, but for the last 2 that totally just went out the window :)

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