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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey there!

This story is really...sweet! Go James/Lily!

I think the story was really funny! (Dumbledore's beard!) and I don't really think that you should really be worried about it since I think you did pretty well for a first one-shot but, of course, there's no avoiding those nervous nerves is there?

Unfortunately, I really can't judge you about the pacing since it's just a one-shot and there won't be enough facts for me to base. As for the flow, I think all went well! And the dialogue were really sweet. I love the fact that you made this a whole christmas event, such a good event to base a one-shot on.

Overall, I think you did a great job for a first and I find this story very cute and sweet! :)

Ta-ta for now,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Oh, you did get around to this fast! Thanks ^_^

Glad you liked the dialogue. That was the part I spent the most time on. I wanted to make sure I got the 'tone' right, if that makes any sense. I wrote it over Christmas, but couldn't submit it till the queue re-opened the other day. :)
James/Lily for life!

Thanks again for being so speedy to review, and I'm glad you liked it :D
Cheers. xx

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