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Review:Akussa says:
Aww, Ronnikin, always thinking so low of himself (does that make sense or is it a very bad direct translation?).

No matter how much this made my heart ache and howmuch I wanted to scream at the screen that he was wrong and shouldn't think things like that, well, I liked it. It felt real and true and honest. So very honest that this is what made it so painful.

We all feel like that at times and when I read this, I couldn't help but remember how much I secretly hated my best friends back in high school becaues they were so smart and so popular and pretty and here I was, plain and funny. So, no thanks for taking me back to that horrible time, alright? :)

Seriously, it was very well written and although I wouldn't think that Ron, as an adult, would still feel that strongly about it (we all grow out of it at some point, otherwise, the sour feeling becomes overwhelming) I did like this story a lot. It was just long enough to make a strong impression and not drag. Great work!!

Author's Response: Makes sense to me! :) All the emotions in this story were coming from a very real place, so I'm very glad they translated well. I think it's a bit depressing, but at the same time, not totally implausible, if that makes sense.

Another reason I decided to make this into an EWC entry was for the reason you mentioned -- so it wouldn't drag and get repetitive. I'm glad you appreciated it, and thanks so much for taking the time to read and review, Akussa!

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