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Review:BlackIsAwesome (I'm not signed in) says:
Kayso, I really like your story, a good ol' James/Oc always makes my day, and yours is really good so far :)

Just a few suggestions:
You should really be careful about your capitalization. Throughout the story, a lot of names, beginnings of sentences, etc are not capitalized. Your content is good, but proper capitalization and lack of other small errors like spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes always makes the story so much better. Just some advice for improvement :)

PS: I really like your OC, she's a very interesting character (in a good way!)

Awaiting your next update, and a hopefully more capitalized chapter, aye?

-BlackIsAwesome :)

Author's Response: thank you so much for your advice im not good with grammar i should really get a beta reader. Anyways thank you for your review it encouraged me to do better :) Thanks for the read and the review glad you like the story :)

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