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Review:ashling586 says:
I love the use of descriptions. By the end of the chapter I felt as if I was right there with her in that depressing confinement. I could easily envision each little detail of her cell. I could feel the desperation and hopelessness that she was feeling.
While at the same time I am left wondering what exactly happened to Ron? Where was Harry during all this? What evidence did they have on her? How had she actually been an accessory to Ron's death? I am now so completely engaged that I just have to know more.
Now I am waiting in tense anticipation to see what is going to happen next and hope that you post another chapter to this story soon.

Author's Response: Hi,
Thank you so much for your review, I'm so sorry it has taken me so long to reply!

All will be answered across the story, I'm really hoping to leave no question unanswered, but exactly what happened to Ron will begin to be answered in the next chapter which is only in need of editing before I post it, so it should be up in the next week or so! Thank you so much for all your lovely comments, I'm glad the descriptions worked well, because I was a little worried about giving them too much attention when they may have needed less considering the focus was on the desperation of Hermione in this situation.

Thanks once again for your review!
~ In The Shadows I Dwell

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