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Review:CambAngst says:
I think this might be the last chapter I get to today, but this has been a really enjoyable ride!

Wow. The scene in the dormitories is really heart-breaking, both for Harry and his kids. It's amazing to imagine Al and Lily getting this kind of insight into their father. Just overwhelming to try to put yourself in their place.

The scene where Ron is replaying his confrontations with Malfoy… Hmmnnn, I'm not quite sure. The notion of the "thought balloons" seemed like a bit of a stretch to me. I love the idea of helping the kids understand why their parents dislike Scorpius's father, I just think there was probably a better way to go about it. But that's mostly just my personal preference. Al's statement that begins with "I can only agree with that" and ends with "I cannot ask them to accept him like a son" also sounds way too formal for a teenager.

"I know you can get pass any puzzle life throws at you." I think you meant to say "past" here.

I'll try to do some more reading tonight. Really looking forward to another chapter!

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