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Review:CambAngst says:
You know, you didn't make it very easy to be a reviewer for this chapter, because there's really nothing at all I could suggest to improve it. It was superbly well done.

It was great to read the kids' reaction to seeing their uncle Fred alive and he and George being their old, mischievous selves. Fred turns into a bittersweet topic in most fan fics because we all know what happens to him. I thought that you hit just the right note of acknowledgment before moving on and telling an enjoyable version of his and Fred's antics.

I also thought you did a good job with the trio's first Quidditch match. It would have been easy to let the next gen kids notice what Hermione was doing, but it also wouldn't have been very realistic in a stadium full of students. Sometimes restraint is the key to great storytelling, and you do a great job of not getting your characters into unrealistic situations just because they're there.

On to another chapter. This is fun!

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