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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
This took a different direction then I thought it would. The ending really made me laugh because I thought it was something urgent, something dragon related and not having to do with naming a baby. Reminds me of my sister! She's pregnant now and is constantly texting me, calling me down to her room and speeding through names after names that I can't even pronounce. I would like to see a follow up story about the dragon pox though because that really intrigued me.

Two quick things. I'm not sure if you were using it as a nickname but you kept switching from 'Sue' to 'Su' and I'm not sure if you meant it because that would be a perfectly alright nickname for someone named Sue. Also, there was one sentence:

She did not wand to spend a second longer in this place than she had to.

'Wand' should be 'want'

See you later Beeezie! :D

Author's Response: Whoops! Thank you so much for those catches - I always manage to miss a couple typos. Blegh.

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate your feedback (as always), and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

A dragon pox fic is eating at my brain... I'm going to force myself to finish two WIPs before I start any more, though! :P


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