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Review:Manga_girl says:
Hello, me again!

I really enjoyed this chapter! This story is certainly getting better as it goes along and it is such a nice idea! The reader really gets engaged to see what will happen next and I cannot wait to read the next chapter! And review of course. :)

The flow of this is great, it reads really well and there are no parts that interrupt the flow. I love how you describe it as it is like the main HP books through Ron's point of view with a sprinkling of next generation! This is a great story!

I love your characterisation still! Harry, Ron and Hermione seem exactly like they would so in the books! Even Malfoy. I loved the bit where Hermione and Ron were arguing about encouraging Harry, it made me laugh.

The word travellers was not used so much in this chapter though you could still try to use it less. I saw no spelling or grammar errors which was great! Praise to you and your beta!

I love your word choice, characterisation, flow and descriptions! This is an amazing story and I plan to leave reviews like this for every chapter!

E x

Author's Response: Hi again!
The more I write this story and the more I like it as well. I found it so much fun to re-read the books and pick up the little points JKR left and fill these moments with ideas of my own.
I really thank you for these nice comments and will work on what you pointed out.

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