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Review:Manga_girl says:
Hello,

What a great start to this story! I love the plot idea and all the things in the box would have such memories for Ron. And the SPEW badge made me laugh.

I really like how this started, the idea is so cute and especially how you portrayed the beginning was great! The idea's are really cool and quirky!

I have one bit of constructive criticism. The dialogue is coming off as slightly wooden. But apart from that, I saw no grammar mistakes or spelling errors!

Your word choice is great, it flows well and I can't wait to see what happens next!

E x

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for this kind review, glad you enjoyed the first chapter!

I thank you also for you honest comment about the dialogue. I am working on it at the moment actually and I hope I can make it better (fingers crossed!).



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