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Review:Beeezie says:
Hey, this is Beeezie, here with your 4/5 reviews! :)

You really are great at pulling a reader in without actually telling them much at all; I think I mentioned that in my review for the Hugo story as well. I feel like you did it a little better there than here - I would have liked just a little more information to draw me in, and leave me feeling a little more intrigued rather than just plain confused - but this was still quite strong. I think I would have just liked a bit more of a hint about why Harry is refusing to go to the party.

I especially liked the end scene - it was really well placed, and ended the chapter on a great (if somewhat sinister) note.

Ahhh you have made me so damned curious about everything!

Author's Response: Yeah, I still wonder why I write this sometimes, it's so confusing. LOL. But it's meant to be, strangely enough. It should start to become clear soon; it's only a short story, so it won't take long. It starts to in the next chapter. Hopefully. :)

Thank you. Sinister, really? Haha. Cool... Is it weird for me to think it's cool? :P

Thanks for the review.

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