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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Well, someone's gone update crazy today xD I came looking for this one shot, and it was already fourth or fifth on the list. Not to say that doesn't excite me, though! Updates are FUN.

Anyways, I really liked this one shot. I was suuuper interested to see how you'd do with slash, since we all know that you can write Sirius and Remus really well. But I think you were able to get that small bit of romance into the story without really making it romantic, which I loved. Some of the descriptions you had of Sirius were lovely, and I like how their relationship in this wasn't physical. It was a fresh take on a Sirius/Remus, which is my one guilty slash pleasure xD I also loved the repetition you had with the coffee/tea. That was really sweet, and I'm a sucker for little motfis like that. I also liked the progression of time, and all the jumps from present to past. It was different for you, but you definitely wrote it just as well!

Another lovely story, and I love to see you write canon characters!

-Naida

Author's Response: Oh Naida, someone needs to stop me. One of my chapters got through the queue in like 15 minutes... and... and, I'm not sure I remember anything that happened after that. But I logged on today and... there's been five chapters and there's another in the queue and... I'd even planned not to submit all my edits till the queue had clamed down for the sake of not flooding the validators but... I'm just a bad person (although I think it is mildly impressive, I'm a writing MACHINE). Ahem.

I didn't think I was ready to pull off a really physical sort of relationship, so this is my not-quite-Remus/Sirius but I loved writing it :D I think I might have a canon character addiction soon (and this will result in more WIPS I fear - or at least more one-shots)

Thank you so much for your lovely lovely reviews.You know I adore them (and you).

(guess what has 0 reviews at the minute... chapter 5 of infringement. -cough-)

THANK YOU MY WONDERFUL FRIEND :D

-AC


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