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Review:ToReleaseMe says:
Back again!

Ahh that was such a good chapter! I love the fighting scenes, and this one was brilliant. I really liked the way you portrayed James and Sirius in the battle as newbies.

I'm liking the characterization of Caradoc more and more as I read the story. He doesn't exactly seem like someone to be in the Order, but I do like him. I think he must be doing some sort of "Snape" thing with the Order and some Death Eaters, ya know? It's all very interesting and I will keep reading to see where this leads.

The story is beautifully done and has amazing potential. The next few chapters will be fun to read, I think, and I look forward to them (hopefully they won't take long to get up - hint, hint). Great job!

- ToReleaseMe

Author's Response: Thank you! (I think I've said that at the start of every Author's Response I've given you so far, you know :D) I hadn't written a fight scene for so long before I wrote this one so I was a little worried about it. Okay, alright, a lot. Ah, James and Sirius are so adorable at the moment. So young and innocent.
I'm glad you noticed he doesn't seem the obvious suspect for an Order member, because that was what I wanted to portray! Not all of the members would have been Gryffindors and not all of them would have been the people you'd suspect to be in it, you know? Once again, I can't answer that question :P
I hope what I have planned for the next few chapters lives up to your expectations! :D I'll try to have another one up soon!

Thanks for the wonderful review!
Aph xx


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