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Review:ToReleaseMe says:
Hey there, me again!

Wonderful chapter, yet again! The writing is impeccable, and I really liked the bit in the bar. It's a wonder that Caradoc is such close friends with Rookwood. Does he know that Rookwood is a Death Eater? And does Rookwood know that Caradoc is in the Order? Hmm... interesting stuff.

So sad that the first death of the story has come so soon, but I suppose that's war, isn't it? I really hope that Caradoc isn't two-timing the Order, but it would be a good twist (plot-wise, anyway). Looking forward to what the next chapter brings!

- ToReleaseMe

Author's Response: Thanks! Gosh, you're making me blush with all these compliments! lol.
I can safely say that, in this chapter, Rookwood and Caradoc do not know about each other's allegiences. I kinda like Rookwood, actually, even though I don't think I should, really.
It is! Things never happen the way you expect them to in war and I wanted to make it clear that people are dying every day, you know, not just at helpful points in the story :D
Still not saying anything on Caradoc betraying the Order!

Thanks for the lovely review!
Aph xx


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