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Review:ToReleaseMe says:
Hey, it's ToReleaseMe with your review!

Wow, I have to say that there isn't really anything bad about this story. It had a bit of a slow start, I think, but it is only the first chapter and it began to pick up as the chapter went on. The spelling and grammar are perfect, and your writing is beautiful. Very simple and flowing, which is nice :)

I really like Caradoc, to be honest. He is mysterious and puts on a tough front, but I think we'll see him break out of that front in a bit. Although I feel like he's not really in the Order... Not sure, though. I'll have to wait to see.

You've written everyone brilliantly. I've only read one other "Order of the Phoenix" fic (which was amazing) and this one is just as amazing. I'm excited to see where this goes!

- ToReleaseMe

Author's Response: Ohmygosh, thank you! I'm always so worried about it because it's so different to what I'm used to writing, you know?
Hm.. I'll bear the slow pace of this one in mind when I write the other chapters - so thanks for mentioning that!
I'm glad you like him! He's a very flawed character, but really, that's part of what I like about him. His tough front... it will crack slightly occasionally and may crack at some point, but I'm not really too sure, lol. As for not really in the Order... well, I'm not going to say anything about that ;)
Seriously? Thanks! Dumbledore and Moody were murder to write. Absolute murder. Grr.

Thanks for the lovely review!
Aph xx


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