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Review:TallestTower says:
Number one fan girl has arrived!
It's been too long since I've read some of your stuff Erica, I'm all too glad I've fixed that! ♥
ack, this is beautiful. I really liked the structure of it, the gaps of time worked really well and overall there was this amazing sense of progression that is just so satisfying in a story ♥

And your characterisations! I loved them so much. You really feel for Lorcan, I liked how he was almost selfish in the beginning he was so absorbed with his own misery (understandable)...you saw how he 'healed' as it went on.

I adored your characterisation of Lucy! She seemed so distinct considering one of my favourite things was the subtlety of the characterisations. The way Lorcan described her and percieved her wasn't too detailed and yet all the emotions and developing relationship was there. I loved the things that he noticed about her. It was such a lovely growing relationship, nothing too flowery or fanciful just subtle and so sweet ack ♥

Also loved the sideplot of his recovering relationship with his brother and how that reflected him finding /himself/ again. And it worked well swapping between that recovering relationship with Lysander and the developing one of Lucy.

Also the plot...! The slight mystery it gave it was wonderful and all very intriguing ;)

Ending was the best thing ever and I loved the dialogue between them. Moar plzums ♥ ♥

Author's Response: So. It totally hasn't been almost four months since you left this review. Nope. Definitely not. ANYWAY, HELENA, I LURVE YOU THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING MY THINGS YOU ARE SO LOVELY I ADORE YOU.

Eee! Lucy and Lorcan are so adorbz together. I really liked writing them in this because they just seemed so lovely together. And yeah, I didn't get too detailed with the descriptions about her because I didn't want the story to be like him being in love with her the whole time. Because he wasn't. So yer. Thanks for da appreciation yo.

LORCAN LYSANDER TWIN LOVE IS SO PRECIOUS. It really, really is.

Thanks so much for reviewing m'dear. Sorry for taking so long to reply. YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU.

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