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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
OROCO ♥

Okay, so here's what's going to happen. You're going to write a novel-length story that begins on their first date and depicts the ups and downs (mostly fluffy ups) of their relationship of hot burning love. Because this one-shot is not enough.

Lucy was adorable, and for some reason I kept picturing Julia as her. Lorcan abusing compliments just to make her blush, oh my god, that is my entire high school life with this pack of boys who realized my face gets about as red as a tomato when I'm complimented. It's really awful. I wanted to smack Lorcan in the face. But I also wanted him to start mauling her with his lurve. He was real and she was real and the story had a lovely splash of mystery to it with the burns and experiment gone wrong. The whole thing was very beautifully written, and watching Lorcan's progression from a vegetable hermit lying there feeling sorry for himself to a man who could swallow his pride long enough to take a walk outside was very entertaining. By the end, I was ready to throttle Lorcan if he let her leave his flat without making a move, and gave a little cheer when he asked her out.

Brilliantly written! YOU NEED TO WRITE MOAR STUFFS, HOKAY? NAO. With more under-appreciated characters that don't get enough face time in fanfic, like Lucy and Lorcan. And their infinite love. ♥

Author's Response: SOROH. :D

Oh, in a perfect world, my love. In a perfect world. However, you know how I am about writing. I say I will write certain things but then go off and write other things instead. Or don't write at all. Anyway..

Lucy is adorable and hehehe Juliaaa! That's funny. :3 Baww, boys are funny like that, aren't they? The sillies. I really loved writing this, because I just thought Lucy and Lorcan were so adorable and it was so much fun, even though there were some sad parts. Usually my sad one-shots are just sad and don't have happy endings, so I rather enjoyed writing this one where the characters were actually happy in the end, lol.

IF YOU SAY SO SARAH. Thanks for reviewing dear! Sorry I took so long to respond!

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