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Review:LoopyLemon says:
I have to thank you for this. The conversation between Severus and Dumbledore is practically a fight I have with my parents constantly. I am leaving soon and it will be so much easier to ignore what they say but while I'm at home I am much like Draco in your story, struggling to live for the light while there is darkness all around. This story just gave me a booster I need for sometimes I forget to let God into my life. Thank you. I wish there were more stories like this. Not preaching but simply showing what more there could be. In fact I may just write one. It is true that the shadow proves the sunshine but the shadow is sometimes so deep and thick it can be hard to remember what sunshine looks like.

Oh and your story is really good also! I am a picky reader so making it to the 20th chapter is a really good thing. I like the relationship between Severus and Harry and the revelation about Draco is also really believable. I hope Harry forgives Severus. If I had anything that could help you improve your writing it would be to slow down sometimes and focus on showing the reader what is happening rather than telling them. It's a hard concept to grasp but a couple of extra descriptive words go a long way to making a story really interesting to read.

Keep writing. You are a really good writer.

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