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Review:Bluestreakspirit says:
Oh. My. Gosh. I am still red from embarrassment for Adelaide! She was SINGING. And Henry WALKED IN ON HER. Oh my giddy great grandmother, that is so embarrassing, I would have died.

"...I miss Ella even though she's a Jafa and *nobody knows what a Jafa is here.*" Umm...what is a Jafa? And I can't figure out these darn accents; it's driving me insane! What the frick does South African sound like? And Maori? I think New Zealand is sort of--forgive me for saying his, but it's my only comparison--Australian/British, right?

I totally did not understand the "ghost chips" part and the "Monique says you're dumb" part until I read the author's note. I feel so ignorant. I'm gonna Google that ad right now.

Scorpius CRIED for his "mummy." Ohmygosh, I almost died.

When Henry said, "'I like it when you smile, Adelaide,'" I was ready to jump on my bed from happiness! And then he practically asked her out for her birthday! Aww :) He is such a sweetie.

Update soon, please! Well, actually, scratch that; here's why: I would rather wait a little while for a nice long chapter (like, over 3,000 words). So, see you whenever! -Cat :)

Author's Response: Seriously, drop by my MTA or shoot me a PM on the forums if there's anything you're not understanding. I love explaining such things (and because I'm overseas now I'm super keen to talk all things NZ, so be sure to ask!)

If you're Googling the ad, you'll know pretty soon what a Maori accent sounds like :P And I'm sure you can find examples of a typical Kiwi accent and a South African one - the Internet is a wonderful place! If it helps, most of the rest of the world can't tell a Kiwi and an Aussie accent apart, but we certainly can :P A common rule is that to us, Aussies sound like they say "Feesh and cheeps" and to the Aussies, we say "Fush and chups" (apparently) for fish and chips. I hope that doesn't confuse you any more :P

There's Nice Guy Henry again! I really am a fan of him, and wait till you see what's happening in the next chapter! I hope the significance won't be too lost on you, but I'll do my best :P And it should be a longer chapter, I hope, with any luck...:P Thanks for the review!

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