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Review:javct says:
Sorry for taking so long with this review swap.

I really enjoyed this. THis is the first Horace-orientated story that I've ever read; he's one of those characters that never get enough credit in fan fictions.

I liked the way that you wrote this. It was different and unique and the flashbacks that Horace got with certain people that were in the battle, it showed just how much Horace cared about his former students and it also helped keep him in character.

Everyone was perfectly in character and I the way that you wrote the battle through Horace's eyes.
All in all, great story!
Jaz

Author's Response: I'm glad that you reviewed- it's no problem at all about the delay!

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. I've never read a Horace-centered story either, so I had a lot of room with this story. I'm pleased that you liked the flashbacks- I wrote them as a way for both myself and the readers to understand Horace better, since we don't know much about his past. It's great to hear that everyone was in character- I struggled with Horace's characterization when I first started writing this.

Thanks once again for reviewing!


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