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Review:javct says:
Back again with another review!

I really enjoyed this chapter. You have defiantly got the style of that era down-pat and the way that you have written it as well is brilliant, I like how you've given it a Jane Austen and Charlotte Bronte feel to it.

So far the characterisation has been very solid and nothing has screamed OOC. Harry (for a period drama) is really good and so is everyone else. I liked it how you gave us a little insight into Lily's head and how she was thinking. You can defiantly tell that Harry and Ginny are her parents in this chapter, she just has that... fiery charm that the Potters seem to have :)

I am really enjoying this Alternate Universe and so far, can't find any historical faults or mannerisms-gone wrong which is good :D

All in all great chapter!
*Jaz, 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much for being able to review this chapter as well! I really appreciate it. :D

It's great to hear that both the style and the characters are turning out so well - it's strange to shift the next-generation characters into a period of manners and very strict social rules, but it's also fun to write about the fashions and those social rules because they create wonderful plot points and character quirks. :D Harry is usually a character I can't write, but he's a little different in this story, more of the patriarch, respectable and benevolent - I was worried he would sound to bland or distant, but I'm pleased that he was neither. It's even better to hear that Lily possesses some of her parents' qualities, especially that fiery charm - she tries to deny it and hide behind conventionality, but there's something more to her that I hope to explore later. ;)

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