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Review:Beeezie says:
Hey, here with your first of five reviews! :)

This was a really cute story, and I thought that you absolutely did them justice. George in particular was perfect in this; you really showed how clever he is, rather than just depicting him as being over-the-top goofy and ridiculous (which is a bit of a pet peeve of mine when it comes to fanfiction about the twins). I thought that his immediate reaction to the basis of Bill and Fleur's war with Louis was great, as was his bribery.

Oh, and Louis and Fred II... perfect. A lot of people have trouble capturing children in fics - the kids just come off either sounding too much like adults or just unrealistic, but you've done a really good job at keeping them sounding like little kids. Louis's stubbornness and pouting and Fred's interpretation of the situation were especially terrific.

This was such a fun read. I'm glad that it was one of your choices! :)

Author's Response: Hey!

Oh good. I've never written George before, so yay! Though, I have read some, so I know exactly what you mean; it gets a little annoying sometimes.

I don't write kids often, but I have younger siblings and cousins (I'm the oldest) with varying ages, so I kind of just base the kids in fics on them. LOL.

Thank you so much! This is one of my favorite fics to write, so I'm glad you liked it. :D

Sam.


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