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I love this story, but I'm going to start with the small problem I have with this chapter, because I rarely have any feedback that tells you about a problem I find.

I found this chapter to involve a lot of running around, either running from Neville, Parvati, or the Tomb. I think maybe there was a little too much running away from things in this chapter, although I guess it helped you to bring a lot of information to light.

You did manage to show us a lot in this chapter. I liked the way that she noticed the drawn in symbol at Dumbledore's tomb, it seemed fitting. Also, the Tale of the Three Brothers was an interesting detail to mention there was good, considering how close the Elder Wand was.
Also, I liked how you showed that the bad feeling between Hermione and Lavender has seemingly disappeared because of the situation. It does seem realistic that they would call a truce of sorts because of the bleak situation.
I also loved how you managed to show her distaste of Divination in this chapter, it was just one of those details which we didn't really need (I don't think), but it was a great detail to add.

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