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Review:Houlestar says:
I like how you've given a disliked character a voice and made her feel somewhat sympathetic. Your narrative in her voice is really good, and definitely has a personality that works well in the story. We don't know much about Pansy and what she's like, but I feel like you've kinda got her here (though it's not my concept of Pansy, it still works well for this story, which is what counts with minor characters). You've done a really good job with the conflicting emotions and confusion that Pansy is feeling. You handle Pansy's relationships with Draco and Hermione very well, and how her feelings are complicated. Good job.
Thanks for entering the Femslash Challenge!
-Houlestar

Author's Response: Thanks so much! (incredibly delayed response!)

The challenge was fun because I've never done femslash before! And I love writing about characters that we don't know much about because there's so much more room to explore. I tried to stay as true to Pansy as possible while having her have this sort of...double life. I'm glad you enjoyed!


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