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Review:accioHPFF says:
Well...

This is just amazing.

I loved the way that you managed to bring in this back story as to why Hermione can stay at Hogwarts. Also, it was really great to read that she didn't magically think of it alone- it took someone else pointing it out for her to truly question it. :)
I wonder what's going to happen to Hermione, I thought the Carrows would have known who she was by now.

There were a couple of places in this chapter where I got stuck, unfortunately. Mostly, it was a lack of punctuation, which meant that it was hard to tell how the sentence was supposed to be broken up. This something minor, but it's just an observation :)

I'm glad that you also managed to get back the Splattergroit cover that Ron was using to hide his absence from Hogwarts. That would have been very important in protecting himself and his family from the Carrows, and the rule of every wizard going to Hogwarts.

Great chapter, as always.

-accioHPFF

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