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Review:accioHPFF says:
*waves*

Here I am again! :)

This story is just so great.

Admittedly, not much progressed in this chapter. Instead, it seemed the main focus was on filling in the situation, and clarifying a few things.

Firstly, the way that McGonagall asked Hermione and Draco to watch out for the younger students was so weird, yet normal at the same time. I can't imagine her doing that in the books, but it seems to fit her character. I think that was a really nice touch.

I like the way that you explained the dormitory situation with Neville. That just shows how empty certain parts of Hogwarts are, and emphasises the gloomy, lonely situation there.

:) accioHPFF

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